A Face in the Shadow

This is actually a book like none you've ever seen before. This book is designed to teach you how to write by critiquing another person's writing. This is the BEST way I've ever used to learn how to write. In this book you'll have lots of space to edit my writing. Please, get a pencil. Scratch out sentences. Rewrite scenes. Move words around. That is the purpose of this. I want you to feel at liberty to edit this and learn from it. This writing isn't horrible. It just isn't quite there. I want you to work to find what makes great writing by editing good writing. What makes this book unique is that it was not written for a person to learn from. This book was twice a requested full by royalty publishers. This book was viewed by 3 different agents (requested manuscripts). This book was almost there, but not quite. That is where your writing might be stuck. Now you can try to figure out why.Someone is killing young women in Woodhaven. And now he has his eyes on Rachel. Rachel is a woman wise in the ways of the world and confident in her own abilities. She has a take charge attitude and ambition on overdrive. If only she was as wise in affairs of the heart. Thanks to her mom's matchmaking two men pull her in different directions. Drew is handsome, charming and successful. He doesn't want to change Rachel but loves her for who she is. Curtis is down to earth with boyish charm. He is determined to win Rachel and show her love isn't about proving who you are but rather being who you are. When Rachel begins to receive tokens associated with the Fratboy Killer she starts questioning everything she has believed about life and the hereafter. One Rose at a time the Fratboy is drawing closer to a meeting and the culmination of his fantasies. Will Rachel find out in time who he is? Or will she too pay the price for Alpha Mu Epsilon?